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Topic:

If you had to share a dormitory room with someone, would you rather choose the person yourself? Or have the university choose the person for you?

No Type Score Comments Submited Date Graded Date View Detail
1 TOEFL 5.5 Using "i" instead of "I" hurts this otherwise very nice essay. 5/25/2002 3:55:57 AM 5/27/2002 1:45:32 AM View detail
2 TOEFL 5.5 Change "her (him)" to "her or him." Or, better yet, just choose one: "her" 5/25/2002 8:56:33 AM 6/21/2002 10:54:49 AM View detail
3 TOEFL 5 See full comments in "Correction" box. 5/25/2002 4:17:37 PM 5/25/2002 11:16:02 PM View detail
4 TOEFL 5.5 5/26/2002 6:29:29 AM 6/21/2002 10:57:07 AM View detail
5 TOEFL 5.5 Avoid making a recommendation in the conclusion if not requested to do so in the essay prompt. 5/26/2002 9:29:25 AM 6/21/2002 11:02:32 AM View detail
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