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To 6.0 | Topic: | | | | If you had to share a dormitory room with someone, would you rather choose the person yourself? Or have the university choose the person for you? |
| No | Type | Score | Comments | Submited Date | Graded Date | View Detail | | 1 | TOEFL | 5.5 | Using "i" instead of "I" hurts this otherwise very nice essay. | 5/25/2002 3:55:57 AM | 5/27/2002 1:45:32 AM | View detail | | 2 | TOEFL | 5.5 | Change "her (him)" to "her or him." Or, better yet, just choose one: "her" | 5/25/2002 8:56:33 AM | 6/21/2002 10:54:49 AM | View detail | | 3 | TOEFL | 5 | See full comments in "Correction" box. | 5/25/2002 4:17:37 PM | 5/25/2002 11:16:02 PM | View detail | | 4 | TOEFL | 5.5 | | 5/26/2002 6:29:29 AM | 6/21/2002 10:57:07 AM | View detail | | 5 | TOEFL | 5.5 | Avoid making a recommendation in the conclusion if not requested to do so in the essay prompt. | 5/26/2002 9:29:25 AM | 6/21/2002 11:02:32 AM | View detail |
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