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TopicID	Type of Essay	Score	Comments	Submited Date	Graded Date
115	TOEFL	5	Too much "Internet" English (u, i, bcoz, abt, &, etc.)	7/4/2002 12:57:04 PM	8/2/2002 11:37:53 AM

Essay Topic:

(Plan or not plan your free time?) Do you prefer make plans for your free time or do things spontaneously?

Essay:

some people choose to make plans for there free times and some dont depending on there moods people who are tired with rough day office work dont make plans, so that they can take enough rest, some people plan out to make maximum utilization because feel thats the most interesting way to relax themselves. I make plans for my free time depending upon my mood but to the maximum i prefer making plans so that i make maxmimum utilization of the free time as i a am busy with my office work all the time and rarely get time to spend with my family and friends. moreover that is the most interesting way to make myself forget the all week long stress ive been threw and i can relax my mind forgetting my regular routine and job work. i feel happy sparing sometime with my dearest ones and making plans is a way to drive away the feeling from your dearest ones that you dont care for them or u dont have time for them. moreover making plans really keeps you busy and doesnt bring about a break in your shedule so that u will not relax more than what u regularly do bcoz once we feel the happiness in resting our bosy it really takes time for us to get back to our regular shedule so i definitely say that we need to make plans and enjoy the free time so that we need not miss the things that others do and so that even we can show our love to our dearer ones and moreover relax ourselves in a different way.making ourselves and our mind relax a bit so that we get back to our regular duties with a fresh and cool mind the next day.

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