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TopicID	Type of Essay	Score	Comments	Submited Date	Graded Date
24	TOEFL	5		9/12/2001 11:29:40 PM	9/15/2001 2:36:07 PM

Essay Topic:

What are the good things and bad things about the place you live in?

Essay:

Many people move to a new place searching for a better house, a better education, a better circumstance etc. Also in my town there are many people who move in and move out. If someone who want advanced ones for their lives, they would like my hometown. And also my friend, I think, does. First of all, we have a good public school which gives better education with well-trained teacher and good facilitates. It is really close to my town. It takes only 5 to 10 minutes on foot to get there. Everyone who want to provide her/his children good education system would satisfy with the school. Besides, there are many private academical institutes which many parents in Korea want to have near their home. Both public school and private institutes would give them the good educational circumstance. Second of all, we have great public transportation systems. One of them is the subway, it is near my town. Almost everyday in the morning, the traffic is jamed in Busan where I'm living. Due to the heavy traffic there are many people who are late for work, but the subway would get rid of the problem. And the other is the buses. They are connected to other sites really well. Without your own car, you can reach anywhere with the bus system. It would be good for the convenient life. To summary, my town is good for the people who want a well-organized education system and a convenient transportation system. Because we have an excellent public school and private institutes for good education and great public transportation system for convenient transportation system. I think, nearly every people would want this kind of town and also my friend does.

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