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Corrections
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Explanations
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16. |
smooth |
We need
the adjective form here to be parallel with straight and hollow.
All three of these adjectives modify the noun stem. |
17. |
many |
We need to
use many with the plural count noun factors. |
18. |
is
believed |
We need to
remove the double subject it since we already have a main
subject, province. |
19. |
using
or
and use |
uses
is a verb and does not have a subject. We can use the -ing form or we
can use a conjunction, and, to make use parallel with are. |
20. |
other |
any
and another are both determiners. We cannot use two determiners
together. |
21. |
of |
We should
say that we have a painting of something. If we want to
use onto, we should say something like she painted a landscape
onto the canvas. |
22. |
her |
We need to
use a determiner here. hers is a pronoun. |
23. |
them |
We need to
use the plural pronoun for the plural referent corals. |
24. |
organizing |
We need to
have the noun form after the preposition for. organize is
a verb. |
25. |
travel |
We need a
plural verb to agree with the plural noun waves. |
26. |
was
introduced |
We need
passive voice here since manioc is receiving the action. |
27. |
Between |
We should
use the preposition Between here because of the meaning. We have
a clue here, and. We should use the pattern between... and... |
28. |
particles |
We need to
use the plural form here since we are talking about more than one
particle. |
29. |
maintained |
maintain
is a verb. We cannot use a verb here for several reasons. First, we
would need a conjunction to join the two verbs are noted and maintained.
Second, maintain is transitive and would need an object.
We need the -ed form here, maintained. |
30. |
industries |
We need to
use the plural form here since we are talking about ten industries. |
31. |
thoroughly |
We need
the adverb form here to modify the verb understand. |
32. |
abundant |
We should
use the adjective form here to modify the noun plants. abundance
is a noun. |
33. |
that |
We need to
use a subordinating conjunction here because we have a verb yields.
We can never use a verb after a preposition. |
34. |
including |
We need to
use the -ing form here since this phrase is reduced from the adjective
clause which included transportation and fishing. |
35. |
material
from |
We need to
change the order here since material needs to be parallel with fragments. |
36. |
who |
We need to
use who since the Big Game Hunters were people. |
37. |
so |
We have a so...
that... clause here. |
38. |
up |
We need to
use a preposition here since we have a noun side after upwards.
upwards is an adverb. |
39. |
Farmers |
We need to
use the person noun form here since the Native American tribes consisted
of people. |
40. |
applied |
We need to
use a past participle here to make the present perfect form. |