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I STRONGLY AGREE TO THE STATEMENT GIVEN ABOVE, DUE TO MANY REASONS, WHICH I AM GOING TO DESCRIBE BREIFLY.

FIRST OF ALL WE EVERYBODY MUST UNDERSTAND HOW HUMAN BODY BEHAVES AND WHAT ARE ITS FUNCTIONALITIES.AS YOU KNOW IT IS LIKE A MACHINE WHICH NEED FUEL,CONTINUEOS SERVISING AND REGULAR ATTENTION.WHEN WE CONSIDER HUMAN BRAIN IT SHOULD BE UNDER CALM ATMOSPHERE(WHICH I SUGEST) TO BE OPERATED NICELY.

NOW THE PROBLEM IS HOW HE ACIEVE OUR OBOVE MENSIONED OBJECTIVES.WHAT IS THE NATURE OF THE FUEL?OBVIOUSLY IT IS OUR DIET.WHEN WE CONSIDER CONTINUES SERVISING?THAT MEANS TO TEST WHATHER ALL PARTS FUNCTION PROPERLY OR NOT.HOW WE TEST THIS?SUPPOSE YOU CAN'T RUN AND YOU FEEL VERY VERY TIRED AFTER PLAYING A SMALL GAME.THAT CONFIRM YOUR BODY IS NOT FUNCTIONING WELL ,IN OTHER WORDS YOU ARE SICK.SO HOW TO UVERCOME THIS?

ACCORDING TO THE INVESTIGATION DONE BY MEDICAL SPECIALISTS ,PEOPLE WHO DO NOT ATTEND TO PLAY GAMES
REGULARY ARE LIABLE TO FACE SEVIER DIESEASES LIKE HART PROBLEMS MORE EASILY THAT THOSE WHO PLAYS GAMES.ACTUALLY THE PROBABILITY OF SUCH DESEASES MAY VARY DEPEND ON REASONS LIKE SMOKING.

WE ALL AGREE TO THE FACT THAT WE BE BECOME OVER AGES THERE ARE MUCH MORE CHANCES TO SUFFER FROM DESEASES.SO MY ADVICE IS TRY TO SERVICE YOUR BODY PROP[ERLY BY DOING REGULAR EXCERCISES(GAMES).THE MAXIMUM PROFIT YOU CAN EARN IS NOTHING ELSE BUT YOUR BODY STRENGTH.